Like the way you did the wings and shirt. I also like the angle you used, I think it's called profile view? Either way I can never draw good side view pictures. Ahh.... My favorite character from the Persona 3 series. He is such a neat in depth character, there needs to be more fan art of him. Nice and gentle feel to the drawing.
I will try, hopefully I can get enough inspiration or time to draw him... I will try and remember to show it to you. I'm not very good at remembering things.. But if or when I draw him I would be happy to show you. Trust me he will be posted on DA if I draw him. And in the Persona fanclub.